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Sword is the only companion by ~Wormnine:iconWormnine:



Sword is my only companion now. I am close to reaching my destination and the darkness around me is more than you can ever imagine. It's not just the absence of light but the pure hollow emptiness that is eating my soul within every step I take forward. My sword feels so much heavier than I remembered. My hand feels so tired to be carrying it. But I see a bit of light shining off it's steel. That light somehow comforts me though it feels at the same time so cold. The same coldness has come to the wind as well. I hardly recall that summer breeze that was all around me when I left on this journey. It was ages ago and I was so much younger though it must have been only six months since... There is some snow in the wind. It goes around in twirls in the dark air. My feet feel so tired but my heart says I must be strong. It is only a few steps away. I must not fear...

I close my eyes and again step forward and my hand takes a stronger grip on my sword. Actually it feels lighter again. I don't know what kind of dark magic there is around this place. It could be some kind of spell to keep travelers on this path tired and scared. I know, that traveler must not always trust on their senses, but their inner sight. I remember my master taught me about rising over any feeling that ties me to the ground and the existence that my senses are telling me. It was so comforting to be in his presence. He was more than an earthly creature who would walk and suffer among us others. He was so wise and powerful. And now he is not with me but in spirit. He was taken away from me and I have left for this journey because I couldn't stand my earthly existence without him. I have left to claim him back from them. I must stay strong and focused because of him.

The sound of the wind tells me that I have come there. Not too bad, just so deeply and terribly cold and so so empty...
©2009-2010 ~Wormnine
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This is for writing contest of :icontedzerds21:. I did it of the picture: [link] . I guess many participant use their imagination on this one piece... :heart: Hope you like this one love! I did it just of pure inspiration as I often do. Not much thinking, just a feeling I got and then I chose a character closest to the feeling. All of your work is superb I must say! :hug:

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:icontedzerds21: was so sweet and helped me to correct my errors in the text. Thanks love! I couldn't have seen them myself... :hug:

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:icontedzerds21:
Thank you so much for your submission. It's a very haunting and melancholy piece and although I can tell that English isn't your first language, you managed to convey the feelings of loneliness and sadness very well. :heart:

I will post this up in my journal soon with the other early entries I have recieved. :heart: :hug: Thanks again darlin.
:iconfallingdark:
Hey sisters! :heart:
Oh, no! I left Journal Entries unchecked on my watch list...next time!
:icontedzerds21:
Lol no worries. Did you like what she wrote? I sure did. :)
:iconfallingdark:
Oh yeah, I loved it!
Sorry, Wormnine. I was going to say so but I got distracted...:hug:
:iconwormnine:
Yeah, I should have checked more carefully that grammar and spelling... :( It would have been appropriate. Well what can I say I love doing things for sudden rush. (art) This was also just written down instantly and not thought over... :) Thank you for your kind words! :hug: :heart:

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Wow, thank you so much bro! You make me very happy! :heart: :hug:

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You liked it? I'm honored, thank you! :hug: :heart:

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Of course I liked it! :heart:
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Don't worry, I'm not really paying attention too much to spelling or grammar, but if you like you can still edit it and polish it off before the deadline there's plenty of time. But that's entirely up to you. :heart: :hug: Take care hon.

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